An actuary is someone who brings a fake bomb on a plane because that decreases the chances that there will be another bomb on the plane. (Laurence J. Peter)
I'd call it "Exam P/1". I'd calling it "Sitting" - commit to actually taking the exam rather than just signing up. Leave a little more space between Sitting and the date - right now it looks like you've registered in the future. I'd indent a little less, as it is easier to read things closer to the margin.
But not too close. Don't Line up the text with the heading. Indenting makes it take less effort to see the overall structure.
Abbreviate months as 3 letters.
You don't need to say "current" with GPA and you don't need the "/4.0".
Don't write the bullets as paragraphs. Don't say "various", as it sounds evasive. I'm also not fond of "different techniques", when "techniques" means the same thing. Don't cover info we already know or assume. As a tutor we already know you work with struggling students. We don't need to be told the SAT is an important exam. If you have info about the results of your tutoring, you might consider using that.
Focusing on what you do is more important that saying what the Elks do. I'd focus more on the "organize" and get rid of the delegate. Note that we'll already assume you delegate as part of "organize". "Attend" doesn't say much. Are you meaning "represent"?
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I make you the first ever honoree of my raised beer mug. I raise my mug to you, Mr. Actuarial Answer Music Guy! *Mr. Actuarial Answer Music Guy* Where others memorize the letters in chunks, you have the insight to turn those letters into notes! *Every Good Boy Does Fine!* You laugh in the face of normal language and instead choose to use singspiel! *Did you come from Germany?* When everyone in the room turns and stares at you playing the desk, you sing your song! Here's to you Mr. Actuarial Answer Music Guy for showing everyone that a major in music isn't completely worthless!
01-12-2011, 12:06 AM
Where others memorize the letters in chunks, you have the insight to turn those letters into notes! *Every Good Boy Does Fine!* You laugh in the face of normal language and instead choose to use singspiel! *Did you come from Germany?* When everyone in the room turns and stares at you playing the desk, you sing your song! Here's to you Mr. Actuarial Answer Music Guy for showing everyone that a major in music isn't completely worthless!
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